arabian_night85 Posted يونيو 2, 2006 Report Share Posted يونيو 2, 2006 Salam everyone This is my first poem in English...I wrote in arabic once when I was a child but my siblings mocked me.. that is why i stopped writing in arabic ...Anyway I used to believe that i dont have any talent what so ever in poetry ..However, before 2 months i decided to give it a shot ..so this is it: Hear me not!! As always, hear me not. Shut me not, in the sunny day and hot or even, in the chilly day and frost. Silent, I've always been. Pleasure, I've never seen. Oppressed, but my soul is keen to start all over and redeem. This is life, hard and ugly. But, I will raise my voice so loudly that even the kingdom of far away will hear my noise, and will lay down because my word was conveyed. __________________ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ابو يوسف Posted يونيو 2, 2006 Report Share Posted يونيو 2, 2006 come on sister , u have a prrety good talent well done dude .. keep it up .. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
arabian_night85 Posted يونيو 2, 2006 Author Report Share Posted يونيو 2, 2006 I am honoured to read this reply brother..Thanks a lot..and this will be a motive to post more..Thanks again Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
M!Ss 1986 Posted يونيو 2, 2006 Report Share Posted يونيو 2, 2006 woooow nice thank's sis Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
arabian_night85 Posted يونيو 2, 2006 Author Report Share Posted يونيو 2, 2006 Thanks my dear Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
بشار عبدالعزيز Posted أغسطس 17, 2006 Report Share Posted أغسطس 17, 2006 wooooow it's very nice keep it' it's really nice poerty Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
a7la dala3 Posted أغسطس 18, 2006 Report Share Posted أغسطس 18, 2006 Hey buddy It's a nice poem keep it up we r waitin 4 ur new poemz Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sephy Posted أغسطس 18, 2006 Report Share Posted أغسطس 18, 2006 no we're not Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
arabian_night85 Posted أغسطس 19, 2006 Author Report Share Posted أغسطس 19, 2006 Bashar thanks for your reply brother Dear a7la dala3 ..its my honour thanks my sweety and to the one called Sephy...duh ..I really dont need your reply and your opinion..keep it to yourself...I would accept it only if it is a real criticism...and not a nonsense... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
@عاشـــ البنفسج ـــقة@ Posted سبتمبر 8, 2006 Report Share Posted سبتمبر 8, 2006 keep it' it's really nice poerty it's verey nice Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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